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I feel the shift in the wind
I feel the Promised Land giving way
I know when the change began
I shall always remember that day

The Republic stood as one united
In the face of overwhelming tragedy
Set upon us by murderous zealots
Hiding behind the mask of religiosity

We all saw the flames rise
We all saw the towers fall
We all saw the wailing faces
We all felt our senses dulled

The world to our aid did come
Sending messages of hope and sympathy
And for one brief moment it seemed
The world was of like mind and symmetry

And now a year or more later
With the dead rightly honored and the heroes justly praised
The sympathy once deserved now is waning
Thanks to the banners our leader has raised

I see the changes he has wrought
A nation militarized to the core
A nation enslaved to one man’s ambition
A nation enslaved to war

And the Republic on the precipice stands
Teetering ever more over the edge
With liberty having been torn down
And Empire rising in her stead
©2005-2009 ~necromancerr
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Originally written shortly after the beginning of the Iraq War.

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:iconsrvndank:
OMG, bro. You are a poetic genious.

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:iconwildfire-soulangel:
omg.....i love ur poetry.....i mean i write poetry but no where near as good as urs........keep it coming.........i don't know if i want 2 put ne of my poetry in.......so yeah.......

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:iconnecromancerr:
Thanks. And I say you should go ahead and put some of your poetry on DA.
:iconwildfire-soulangel:
alright.....thanx.....i think i will......idk though....all of my friends say that it is horrible but idk......

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:iconfangfingers:
In a way it reminds me of "Charge of Light Brigade " ...but only inasmuch as we too attacked the wrong battery ...:laughing:


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"oh horsefuck...youre all going to kill each other and i'll be left here all alone on this ball of dumbness ....." ~ From : Golden Epiphanies from the Idiot Rock in Space ~by Fangfingers

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